When You Fall
When you fall...
you think about why you are there
maybe you jumped
or dove or was pushed by an enemy
or a lover
But maybe you deserved to be their
or maybe not
lifes not fair
or maybe its the fairest thing in the world
But think why did I fall?......
Wednesday, October 8, 2008
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7 comments:
It's a very well written poem.
Poem?
Good visual
Hi!
I have competion. MY POEMS ARE STILL MORE DEPRESSING! Just kidding, good job though. It's really well written.
Ewwwww. You said, "lover"...
Gross, gross, gross-
I love this poem!!! I'm not just saying this because it is depressing, but it's written really well and is deep weither you intended that or not.
that's was a really well written poem. it really makes me wonder why you fell .
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