Wednesday, October 8, 2008

When You Fall

When You Fall
When you fall...
you think about why you are there
maybe you jumped
or dove or was pushed by an enemy
or a lover
But maybe you deserved to be their
or maybe not
lifes not fair
or maybe its the fairest thing in the world
But think why did I fall?......

7 comments:

Nick Som said...

It's a very well written poem.

Anonymous said...

Poem?
Good visual

mr. dr. sir. dude said...

Hi!

h2opologirl said...

I have competion. MY POEMS ARE STILL MORE DEPRESSING! Just kidding, good job though. It's really well written.

Catherine's blog said...

Ewwwww. You said, "lover"...

Gross, gross, gross-

h2opologirl said...

I love this poem!!! I'm not just saying this because it is depressing, but it's written really well and is deep weither you intended that or not.

Anonymous said...

that's was a really well written poem. it really makes me wonder why you fell .